It is of considerable interest to see in the bizarre picture that……
二、適當(dāng)用被動替換主動,這樣能更客觀地反映事實(shí)。
句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attent
ion should be paid to. ) 舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively。
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. The reason is that the billboard is advertising a “sale of the dead bodies”。
2.使用介詞短語
In the picture, two people are reading the announcement and they are being shocked at the message of “a sale of dead bodies” on a billboard。
3.使用疑問句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. Why are they so shocked? The reason is that the billboard is advertising a “sale of the dead bodies”。
4.使用原因狀語從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. As the billboard is advertising a “sale of the dead bodies”, they are shocked at the message。
5.使用結(jié)果狀語從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. The billboard is advertising a “sale of the dead bodies” so that they are shocked at the message。
6.使用時間狀語從句
In the picture, while the two people are reading the announcement on the billboard about “a sale of the dead bodies”, they are being deeply shocked。
7.使用分詞短語
In the picture, reading the message of a ‘sale of the dead bodies” advertised on the billboard, the two people are deeply shocked。
8.使用主動語態(tài)
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard advertising a “sale of the dead bodies” shocks the two people reading it。
9.使用There be 結(jié)構(gòu)
In the picture, there is an announcement on a billboard advertising a “sale of the dead bodies” and shocking the two people reading it。
10.使用倒裝句
On a billboard is an announcement advertising a “sale of the dead bodies”. The two people reading it are being shocked。
11.使用定語從句
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard which advertises a “sale of the dead bodies” shocks the two people reading it。
12.強(qiáng)調(diào)句
In the picture, it is the announcement on a billboard advertising a “sale of the dead bodies” that shocks the two people reading it。
13.虛擬語氣
In the picture, were it not for the announcement on the billboard advertising a “sale of the dead bodies”, the two people would not be so shocked。
四。盡量復(fù)雜作文中的句式
It is of considerable interest to observe in this bizarre caricature that a couple of citizens, reading an announcement issued on the billboard, are taken aback as a result of the astounding message which informs people of a “sale of dead bodies”。
句中使用的詞組包括:be of considerable interest, a couple of, taken aback, as a result of, inform sb. of
3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad (如果bad做表語,可以用be less impressive替換)
Eg.:An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive。
4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替換many。
注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。
Eg.:Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that…。同理用most…if not all 替換most。
5.a slice of, quiet a few 替換some。
6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替換think (因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z,所以要加that)。
7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing。
8.shared 替代 common 。
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits。
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion。
11.Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing。修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly。)
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth。