2016年12月四級(jí)寫作真題解析

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第一套：

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.

第二套：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

第三套：

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.

命題解析

2016年12月四級(jí)寫作命題再次體現(xiàn)了強(qiáng)烈的反押題傾向，考察了以前從未考察過的一種情景作文：正反對(duì)比型情景作文，類似于以前的老托福寫作題目。考察的話題關(guān)于大學(xué)畢業(yè)的選擇：第一套題目關(guān)于就業(yè)與創(chuàng)業(yè)，第二套題目關(guān)于去國(guó)企還是合資企業(yè)，第三套關(guān)于就業(yè)還是考研。這三套題目均來(lái)自于2013年考研英語(yǔ)（一）的大作文：大學(xué)畢業(yè)生的選擇。

在2016年12月之前的新東方在線四級(jí)寫作課程中，筆者詳細(xì)講解過情景作文的寫法，并提供了十大必背范文供考生背誦，其中第一篇教育、第二篇網(wǎng)絡(luò)與教育、第四篇課程、第六篇參與、第七篇教育中諸多表達(dá)均可使用。只要考生提前背過，應(yīng)該感覺易如反掌。

2016年10月筆者出版的《四級(jí)寫作與翻譯終極預(yù)測(cè)20篇》中，第14篇職業(yè)選擇、第15篇兼職、第16篇情景作文（最愛的工作）、十大萬(wàn)能框架第三篇教育均可使用，其中第14、16篇及第三篇萬(wàn)能框架幾乎全文均可使用。下面的精彩范文即來(lái)自于第16篇最愛的工作，只改動(dòng)了主題詞。

綜上所述，雖然四級(jí)寫作反押題傾向明顯，但只要考生認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備，取得高分并非難事。

第一套詳解：

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.

精彩范文

In the past two years of my college life, I have never ceased to think what kind of work I shall take up upon graduation. Although my ideas are not consistent,I have now decided to start a business of my own as my lifelong career.

A variety of factors have led me to make this decisionover other more lucrative ones. To begin with,running my own business means freedom and independence. As aperson having my own business,I am free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions, a privilege not everyone can have, even those with highly-paid positions. More importantly, I likestarting my own business in that it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catch a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, no more worries about your paycheck which is steady, if not handsome.

Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal for the satisfaction of being your own boss and a gentle peace of life.

參考譯文

在過去兩年的大學(xué)生活中，我一刻也沒有停止過思考：我大學(xué)畢業(yè)以后要干什么工作。盡管我的想法很多，但我現(xiàn)在已決定，我將開創(chuàng)我自己的事業(yè)。

有很多理由使我做出這個(gè)選擇而不是其他較賺錢職業(yè)的決定。首先，創(chuàng)業(yè)意味著自由和獨(dú)立。當(dāng)一名創(chuàng)業(yè)人員我可以有自己想法的自由，有自己作決定的自由，而這個(gè)特權(quán)不是每一個(gè)人，甚至拿高薪的人都能擁有的。其次，我喜歡創(chuàng)業(yè)，是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)工作給我一份安寧。我無(wú)須每天早上去趕汽車，無(wú)須為如何討好老板，如何不落在人家后面而焦慮不安，無(wú)須擔(dān)心自己的工作收入，雖然不那么豐厚，但卻十分穩(wěn)定。

沒有什么東西，甚至高工資，可以抵得上自己做主人的樂趣和平靜安寧的生活。

亮點(diǎn)詞匯

cease停止 take up從事 upon graduation畢業(yè)時(shí)although盡管 consistent連續(xù)的 lifelong終生的 career職業(yè) a variety of很多 factor原因 lead to導(dǎo)致 lucrative誘惑性的to begin with首先 freedom自由 independence獨(dú)立 privilege特權(quán) highly-paid position高薪職位 more importantly更為重要的是in that由于 offer提供 certain某種 peace安靜 rush匆忙 anxiety焦慮 please取悅 paycheck收入 steady穩(wěn)定的 handsome豐厚的、英俊的big salary高工資 equal抵得上 satisfaction樂趣、滿足 gentle安寧的

道長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)評(píng)

四級(jí)寫作已經(jīng)多次考察情景作文，如：2014-6：What is the Most Interest Place in China（中國(guó)最有趣的地方是哪兒），2014-6：What is the Most Interesting Place in Your Hometown? （你的家鄉(xiāng)最有趣的地方是哪兒）， 2014-6：What is the Most Interesting Place in Your Campus?（你們校園最有趣的地方是哪兒），希望考生引起高度重視。

句型拓展

1、To make my lectures more constructive and stimulating, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world——the very thing I enjoy in my life.

要使我的課更有啟發(fā)性，更生動(dòng)有趣，我就得讀更多的書，探索新的知識(shí)，對(duì)世界要有更好的了解，而這正是我生活中最喜歡干的事。

2、This is inevitable because ours is a society whereone’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess.由于我們社會(huì)中一個(gè)人的收入仍然由你所擁有的知識(shí)所決定，因此這一點(diǎn)不可避免。

With the growing number ofcollege graduates being turned out each year, the situation inthe job marketis getting tighter and tighter.隨著每年畢業(yè)的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生越來(lái)越多，就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的形勢(shì)越來(lái)越嚴(yán)峻。